aweasome picture, most critiq are already been point out

but i got to agree with skyslam that boob are not really rounded. not a perfect round anyway . In fact they can come in many diffrent shape . The shade of the light is little wierd but i think if light come up from top it would actaully look some thing like that, but if thats the case then you have shade the whole lower body darker too.

im not sure too much about the baby face thing i dont think its wrong more of just style, like Negima everyone have baby face too so is many other manga. Also pulling every face feature down will even make it look more like baby.

Oh, wow. Umm... uhh, you sound like you know about them a lot my friend!
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Actually, now it looks like Akiyama Mio.

maybe you know too little my friend !

Mio got really long face tho (actually all k-on! character have long face

Oh man, I can't come up with no comeback... ouch that was a good one hahaha
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But maybe my remake of the head only fits my style, because Boat's style has longer heads I think.

Torpedo boobs are not appreciated by the ladies here. D< Well, I don't know about Sarah... -stares at suspiciously-